I’m a mystery writer. Writing is my thing and I expect that a lot of people who read this blog are aspiring writers or are writers. So I thought that I’d post a blog about the basics of writing. A nice refresher for those who are honing the craft and a building block for those starting out.
Let’s begin right at the beginning. What’s a story? Well it’s a series of events. The narrative is the way in which the story is told (this involves things like narrator, location, point of view, organisation of events). The plot involves characters performing actions and the relations between events. It’s the links between the events that make up the plot.
So for instance “King died. Queen died.” This is the story.
“King died. Queen died of grief” This is a plot.
So how can this relationships between events be revealed? One way was put forth by ye olde philosopher Aristotle in”Poetics”. It was back in Ancient Greece that writers developed a standard structure of plot.
Here is the basic structure: First the causative situation, then a complication, then the CLIMAX! then falling action, then denouement.
So take Hamlet as an example.
The causative situation is the death of King Hamlet and the melancholic situation of Prince Hamlet.
The complication is the appearance of the ghost of the former King who wants to avenge his death.
The CLIMAX! is the point where the new King realises that Hamlet knows about the murder thus the King has to kill Hamlet.
Denouement is when everyone dies and order is restored.
Sorry I revealed the ending!
In a mystery/detective story the denouement is where everything is revealed
This can be a good template for the structure of your own narrative.
If you’re looking for a more experimental structure you can link events thematically or via flashbacks. “I the Divine” dabbles with an experimental structure, the whole book is made up of only first chapters.
You can also choose to have your narrative to be character based, which is more arthouse or literary. Or you can choose to have it plot driven, think Hollywood Blockbusters and airport novels.
Plots for character driven stories usually include the character going on a journey of discovery (this can be a real journey or a mental journey, the point is that it brings about change to the character) . Give the character the right to write their own story. This sounds a bit weird because characters are, you know, not real and all. But if you get to know them they do take on a life of their own. You do know that your character named Katie, a goody-good straight A student who never stays out late and always hands in her assignments on time would never, ever, not even to save her own life, shave her head, while your other character Leo, a high-school drop out with a nicotine addiction would do it in a heart beat. Get to know them then throw them into a situation, just to see what they will do. In realistic fiction characters have the capacity to develop and change. Or at least the capacity to change. So perhaps Katie does discover after all that she will shave her head to save the life of her little sister.
How do you make your characters seem real? Characters need consistency. So if in one chapter they hate ice-cream you can’t have them enjoying a double scoop chocolate ice-cream the next chapter. Unless you want your character to act out of character! This can be a very interesting plot point. Reasons for inconsistencies could be the starting point for a character focused story. A great example of this is Tim Winton’s “The Riders” where the main character’s heavily pregnant wife suddenly leaves him, abandoning her daughter. She gives absolutely no indication why she has left or where she has gone. This is out of character for her because she had previously been so stable and normal. Why did she do this? Where did she go? Did he know her at all? These questions haunt him and the reader throughout the whole novel.
Another way to make your character more real is to delve into the private lives of your characters. A good way to do this is to record their private thoughts for the reader.
To establish your character provide a little sketch of them when they are introduced. Something like “Mary is a 33 year old single mother living in Tokyo Japan. She has twinkling brown eyes. Her black hair is neatly held back in a pony tail with an elastic band borrowed from her daughter. She dresses plainly but tastefully. She likes to jog and rob liquor stores in her spare time.” or some such thing. This is also good for minor characters. Long detailed descriptions were once really popular in 19th century novels but are a bit out-dated these days. Such as this cropped description of Mr Utterson from Robert Louis Stevenson’s “Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde”
“Mr. Utterson the lawyer was a man of a rugged countenance, that was never lighted by a smile; cold, scanty and embarrassed in discourse; backward in sentiment; lean, long, dusty, dreary, and yet somehow lovable. . . . He was austere with himself; drank gin when he was alone, to mortify a taste for vintages; and though he enjoyed the theater, had not crossed the doors of one for twenty years. But he had an approved tolerance for others; sometimes wondering, almost with envy, at the high pressure of spirits involved in their misdeeds; and in any extremity inclined to help rather than to reprove. . . . [I]t was frequently his fortune to be the last reputable acquaintance and the last good influence in the lives of down-going men.”
Modern day novelists rely more on physical appearances to take a quick snap shot of the character, as seen with the character Daffy in Alex Garland’s “The Beach”
“His face was flat like a boxer’s, the nose busted too many times to have any form, and his lower jaw was too large for the top half of his skull. It would have been threatening if not for the body it was attached to. The jaw tapered into a neck so thin it seemed incredible that it supported his head, and his t-shirt hung slackly on coat-hanger shoulders.”
Self-description can be a very effective way to build character. In one swoop you can give startling insight on how the character perceives themselves. Tone is absolutely crucial if you use this device. For a good example checkout psychopath Patrick Bateman in Brett Easton Ellis’s “American Psycho”
““I have all the characteristics of a human being: blood, flesh, skin, hair; but not a single, clear, identifiable emotion, except for greed and disgust. Something horrible is happening inside of me and I don’t know why. My nightly bloodlust has overflown into my days. I feel lethal, on the verge of frenzy. I think my mask of sanity is about to slip. ”
Well hope you enjoyed this blog post and will join me in the future for more writing tips.